Monday, August 29, 2011

Activity 1f- Read the Poem and Answer the Given Questions

Activity 1f- Read the Poem and Answer the Given Questions



1. What is the person in this poem doing?

The person in this poem is writing Christmas cards while trying to remember the people he rediscovered in his address book.

2. Identify any similes or metaphors in this poem.

- 'The people in our lives that sail like green leaves and disappear like snow.'

3. Answer the poets question, "Where do they go, the people in our lives?" What do you think?

I think people in our lives go to either new places (moved away), have had new occupations or in some way, have lost communication with the poet over time.

4. Why does the poet send cards to people to the people he can't remember?

The poet sends cards to the people he can't remember because he wants to thank them for any care or kindness they've shown to him that he may have forgotten about.

5. Gives a summary of this poems effectiveness. What impact does this poem have on you?

This poem gives you a feeling that you are interacting with and feeling the emotions of the poet due to the use of first-person past tense and a few similes.

Activity 4c- Write a Comparison of the Given Song and Poem

Activity 4c- Compare the Given Song and
Poem

Song...


Poem...







Response
Comparing the given poem and song, I  believe the poem conveys its meaning better than the given song.

The poem, (actually a song in poetic format) takes the reader through time from the girl's departure to her life afterwards. It makes use of rhyming devices, dialogue lines and first person perspective (of the parents). The chorus occurs at three stages of the poem, all varied in some way. The chorus also uses an echoing effect to add to the subject matter of the poem.

The song on the other hand, is a reflective song based on a single scene, the scene of a loved one leaving the poet. Only two verses vary from the chorus, the first and the third stanza. The song does not personally describe the person who is leaving, but rather the emotional effect they had on the poet. The song's meaning is interpreted through the use of repetition. 

Activity 1b- Outline the Syllable Sequence of the Given Poem

Activity 1b- Outline the Syllable Sequence of a Poem


Winter
The snow was pelting,     (5 syllables)
                      drifting,   (2 syllables)
                      melting,   (2 syllables)
Soft and feathery,           (5 syllables)
Winter weathery,            (6 Syllables)
Floating and Flurrying and (7 Syllables)
The wind came crashing, (5 syllables)
Free.                              (1 syllable)
                        whirling, (2 syllables)
                         dashing, (2 syllables)
Bitter and freezing,          (5 syllables)
Nipping and Whipping,      (5 syllables)
Me!                                  (1 syllable)

Helen M. Shires (aged 7)



Friday, August 26, 2011

Activity 2a- Read and Answer the Questions About the Given Poem

Activity 2a- Read and Answer the Questions About the Given Poem



Questions
1. What scene is recreated for us by the language and 'flavour' of the opening stanza? Who is responsible of all these shouts?

The language and 'flavour' of the opening stanza creates the scene of an enthusiastic audience commenting as they observe the game.

2. In the second stanza we meet the football hero for the first time. As yet he remains unamed, being referred to only as he. What descriptive information are we given about him in this stanza?

The football hero is described as a 'flier with a crippled wing', which relates to his leg injury that stops him from playing at his best.

3. Identify the sport which is the focus of this poem. What evidence is there for your conclusion?

The sport that is the focus of this poem is most likely soccer. The second stanza describes the sport through the details of how the football hero's injury had affected the performance.
The fourth stanza tells the reader about the smells within the changing rooms during break. The poet also describes the players as they change soccer gear for the next half.

4. Comment on the effect achieved by starting the third stanza with "Gidday Kenny!" and finishing it with "Now, fellas..." How does the poet picture Kenny's situation?

The first phrase of dialogue used in the third stanza starts the picture of the teammates interacting with Kenny. As the stanza progresses, the reader learns that Kenny has a broken leg. Finally, the last phrase of dialogue ("Now fellas...") tells us that the team is discussing tactics to use in the soccer game after break.

5. What evidence is there in the poem to suggest that the scene occurs during the quarter, half-time or three-quarter break?

In the second stanza, the poet describes sirens going off and the audience rushing off to get some food, immediately after recreating the scene of the audience's ecstatic behaviour towards the game.
The second last stanza also includes a few words from the players, mainly about tactics to use in the game.

6.The sights, sounds and smells in the dressing room all bring back memories to Kenny. Identify some of these sights, sounds and smells.

The sights, sounds and smells Kenny encounter bring back memories of Kenny being part of the team. Some of these things that Kenny encounters are eucalyptus oil, sweat and mouthguards.

7. What memories do these trigger in Kenny?

These memories remind Kenny of the times and feelings he felt when he was able to play at his best and was accepted as part of the team.
8. Comment of 'Smoke wreathed and grinned its way around.'

This phrase is a personification of the smoke spreading around the room.

9. Why does Kenny leave the dressing room?
Kenny leaves the dressing room because he has realised that he couldn't be part of the team anymore due to his injury.

10. How does Kenny feel at the end of the poem?
Kenny feels rejected and sad knowing that he is no longer able to play free and proud with his teammates.

11. In your own words briefly state the theme of this poem. 

The theme of this poem is about Kenny's last performance and his final feelings that caused him to leave the team.

Activity 5b- Poetry Puzzle

Activity 5b- Poetry Puzzle

1. An Old Lady of Brooking
- She could bake sixty pies
- Without even going or looking
- There was an old lady of Brooking
- All quite the same size
- Who had a great genius for cooking;

An Old Lady of Brooking
There was an old lady of Brooking,
Who had a great genius for cooking;
She could bake sixty pies,
All quite the same size,
Without even going or looking.

2. The Railway Official
- It cut him-it cut him in two!
- Though he smiled and bowed
- A railway official of Skewe
- That engine was proud
- Met an engine one day that he knew

The Railway Official
A railway official of Skewe,
Met an engine one day that he knew,
Though he smiled and bowed,
That engine was proud,
It cut him-it cut him in two!

3. A Young Lad of St Just
- Who ate apple pie till he bust;
- What finished him off was the crust
- It wasn't the fru-it
- That caused him to do it
- There was a young lad of St Just

A Young Lad of St Just
There was a young lad of St Just,
Who ate apple pie till he bust,
It wasn't the fru-it,
That caused him to do it,
What finished him off was the crust.

Thursday, August 25, 2011

Activity 1c- State Whether the Couplets are in Duple or Triple Metre

Activity 1c- State Whether the Couplets are in Duple or Triple Metre
1. All the ships are slowly moving,
    Down along the harbour side.

Answer: Duple Time

2. One at a time, two at a time,
    Noah will count them as upwards they climb.

Answer: Triple Time


3. Down come the raindrops on a summer day,
    Wetting the windows, washing dust away

Answer: Triple Time






Activity 2b- Haiku Poem

A Hunting Arctic Fox
Lightning bolt of fur,
A brave fox in the Arctic,
Pursuiting his prey.